Repairing A Broken Heart pt4 ch1

Early the following morning Maya was awaken by the intense cold weather that seem to have developed overnight, she got up and look out the window to see flakes falling from the sky, it wasn’t Christmas but it was common for her to experience snow in April, for she lived in Boston.
Maya then went to Cara’s room to make sure she was ok, everything was fine so she went to get water in the kitchen, after she had the water she went back to her room and sat on her bed she took up her phone and saw that it was only 4:30am.

She realized there were unread messages, Maya opened the messages and read them before she knew it she was scrolling through her fb news feeds when she saw notifications which she haven’t  seen before she went to bed.

Maya opened the notifications to find out Jason had been liking her photos and commenting on them,  her phone vibrated, this time it was a message. She opened the message to see it was Jason asking her to be his girlfriend, Maya didn’t respond but he didn’t stop he kept on sending messages saying he can’t sleep cause he can’t stop thinking about her. What a coincidence”.

Maya laughed at him and said are you serious, yes baby!”, her replied.
He ask her to be his lady in a soft tone of voice but Maya told him they can only be friends, he insisted that he wanted them to be more than friends but Maya still didn’t give in to him. A few minutes later Maya stopped texting and pretended she was asleep, he taught she fell asleep so he stop texting.

Now the dust had pass with time approaching the dawn real fast it was still cold and misty outside, Olivia had woke up and went to the bathroom and washed her face, Olivia then made breakfast, when she was done it was 6:15 am.

At this time some neighbors could be heard starting their car’s, a busy day had started. Maya had gotten ready for work, she went to her daughters room and told her it was time for her to go to work and tell her to be a good girl then kissed her good bye, as she walked out she shouted to Olivia, I’m out Sis!”, what about breakfast?” asked Olivia, don’t worry I’ll get something on my way, I’m late”, said Maya as she hurried out.

As she walked towards the garage she could see the snow piled  up  outside the door,  she didn’t make that a bother to her, she open he garage by remote and went in, then got into her car and drove off.

While driving Abby called her, as she opened the line Abby started telling her Jason Fernando is on her friends list, they then discuss his information, and this made Maya curious so she listened to all Abby was telling her.

Then she told her she had accepted a friend request from him, this wasn’t a big deal so they laughed and talk until they strayed from the conversation, they spoke until Maya arrived at her place of employment, they ended the call and Maya went to work.

While on her break he texted her and she responded, for months this would continue sometimes she wouldn’t answer to his texts, after several months Maya starts to gain interest in Jason, one day he texted her and ask her if she was single and she replied telling him it’s complicated.

They spoke by message for weeks until Jason finally ask her once again for a chance in her life, Maya told him she would have to think about it. Three weeks later Maya accepted his request to start a relationship with her.

               To Be Continued
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5 Comments Add yours

  1. mandibelle16 says:

    I have read a couple of your chapters about Maya and they are very good. My advice would be some advice I received earlier on when writing stories. “Show” don’t “tell.”

    What I mean by this is, even though you can’t have dialogue explain everything Maya is doing someone of it you could through dialogue with her kids and actually telling the reader what Jason is texting Maya and what he’s telling her on FB. I have struggled with this too but It really does help a story move along and be more exciting. As well, the important moments with Jadon etc you want to be detailed with those or moments with Maya’s kids.

    I very much enjoyed her coming down the stairs with a bat and hearing her kitten, that was well told 🙂

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    1. Andre says:

      Thank you very much for the heads up, your view is well appreciated.

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Charz Holoman says:

    Great just love this story, I’m hooked and getting anxious to know what’s next.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Andre says:

      I’m glad to know you are enjoying, as usual the rest will be posted soon

      Like

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